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Buenas tengo una pregunta, el juego esta truducido al español o solo esta ingles, me enteredo que tu juego ha sido muy criticado, trate de no prestarle mucha atención a esas criticas, se que es muy dificil no prestarle atención, pero no te desanimes por esto, yo se qur hay vario como yo que quiere ver este juego saler adelante aunque sea poco a poco, el juego se ve que esta muy increible, te deseo lo mejor de todo corazón y que te recuperes

Esta en español nativo (traducido al ingles)
Muchas gracias!, todos mi juegos son criticados, de hecho Irreverent Heresy le quite la posibilidad de Review por lo hostil y el acoso, irónicamente es uno de los que mas activo esta.
Gracias!
Si, esta en terapia aun! Es bueno ver que genera interés, pero es un juego sobre todo en la programación, bastante complejo y bueno, los haters y de mas se hacia pesado.
Pero, si hay interes seguro o lo continuo o hago algun remake mas estructurado o con otro motor.

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me decepcione cuando vi que la ultima actualización del juego fue hace tanto, pense que lo habian abandonado, pero viendo que estas respondiendo los comentarios y leer la razón por la cual actualmente no hay actualizaciones. solo quiero decirte, estuve durante un año buscando este juego (ya que no me acordaba el nombre) puesto a que tuve que desinstalarlo debido a que mi cel no lo corria bien, para que te hagas una idea de lo mucho que me gusta tu juego, y a muchos mas que les gusta, no te presiones ni tampoco te hagas mala sangre por esos infelices que critican solo porque sus vidas son pateticas, este es un gran juego y seria una lastima que se abandone

Muchas gracias!

No te voy a mentir que LMR esta un poco en terapia intensiva, le tengo mucho cariño, pero muchas veces pense en abandonarlo.

Por un lado, si que ha sido muy criticado y me he de ganado muchismos insultos gratuitos, pero no voy a mentir, hasta la fecha es el mejor puntuado y de mas alcance.

Lo que sumo, fue que después de pandemia cambie de horario y trabajo, y se me hizo super pesado!

A eso (si es verdad) que sentía que mucha gente ya no el importaba el juego, pero eso pasa en todo porque suelo tener un perfil muy bajo.

Pero como será, que incluso en otro motor empecé a remakear (por segunda vez) a las chicas principales.

Y en Irreverent Heresy, suele aparecer alguna de las chicas (pero la versión más oscura o perversa).

Tengo que arreglar unos bugs, pero tu mensaje me anima incluso a intentar darle vida nuevamente, incluso, con otro motor más actual.

Pero no quiero empezar para abandonar; actualmente sigo igual con el trabajo; pero ya estoy un poco mas acostumbrado.

Muchas gracias por el mensaje!

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I finally got around to playing your game and I can say it didn't disappoint. I will play Irreverent Heresy as well. Good work. :)

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Thank you very much!

Just this time I've been so depressed by the harassment I receive from those who don't like what I do, in fact I thought about taking a “vacation, to get my strength back”.

Thank you!

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You're welcome. Taking time for yourself is more important than this stuff, especially when dealing with negativity online. Usually, those harsh comments are a reflection of their own misery/nonsense, so focus on what's best for you. Your well-being should come first.

If it helps, I like the creativity in your games so far.

You're welcome.

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Hello there, i love your game but the translation could be better. but no this isnt just some harsh comment. if you would like your game to be in another language aswell (German) i would be up for it.

Hey!

Of course!

Although it's an arduous task! entere codice and so on, as the random conversations of the characters is a lot, but if you want you can do it!

I know some people have done some of them in Portuguese and Russian.

Yes, as you can see the most reliable is to take from the spanish version!

Thanks for your interest! LMR has been stopped for a while now, in fact all my NSFW projects are flowing slowly, I've had in the last time a big drop of interest for these things, I'm glad to know that some of you still like it.

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Is the game finished or will there be more updates?

At the moment it is stopped, I am focused on other projects.

Any M-M content?

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male -male ; gay?

If so, no, just trans.

I see. Are there any plans for male-male (gay) content?

If not is it something you would consider adding?

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Not for now; only trans (not futa, i.e. transsexual).

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Heya Chris what are you using to create this game is it hs1 or hs2 or something else? also keep up the great work :D

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Thanks!

The original was HS1, this is HS2, far superior in many ways; HS1 needs a lot of mods to try to correct lighting, and it takes ages just to load, but as the previous PC was a toaster, it works very well.

With the new PC; which is not "Uff" either, but it is more up to date, HS2 works fine (in all respects).

Oh okie dokie, thank you for that, I tired to download hs1 once but i saw what it needed and decided that my laptop would not be able to handle it xD i hope you dont mind me asking, what mods do use for LMR if you do use any?

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Almost none, it is R7, and R10 or R11, those come more nourished.

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👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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any femdom in this game and character name, please?

or dominating personality female character name 

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I don't think there is a full-fledged Fendom, but the most similar in the first instance is Frezzita, and then Lina; both with strong character "and go to the front", then there are others but no H-scenes yet.

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Wow,Another update ——It's really wonderful.👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻😁😁😬😬😬

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🤪👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻Awesome game.🤪👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

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For some reason your game doesn't even want to start on my PC.

Uhh that's weird! are we talking about the windows version?

Renpy is generally accessible for many pc's, is it too old? Because, what can happen that it has a lot of videos, and so on, this makes it hard to start, it seems that the game does not start, but suddenly appears.

No, its only a 3 year old windows PC.

There shouldn't be any problems, you don't get any error messages or anything?

Oddly no, I double click to launch the game and nothing happens.

Maybe, something of the antivirus? the truth surprises me, now this the 0.5 for patreon, but I have not been notified of anything, even for the 0.4 has a bug, but already advanced the game.

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This game is very awesome and promising. I like it, there're lots of lore in it, interesting!

And so, I want to report:

There are some bugs in Sol Invictus,I couldn't go most places(Couldn't keep playing) , because these bugs will occur.😂 Hope you could fix them in next version.😉😉😉😉😉 Thanks!😁😉

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after zayron then in the afternoon

this error happened when it goes from afternoon to night, after when zayron is in the bathroom thinking about the mc. I couldnt progress any further into the game because of this
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Yes, I have been notified of this error, thank you!

It's a renpy problem, I hope to fix it as soon as possible!

Maybe I'll do an intermediate update fixing that bug (and with more content, which I'm already working on) Try "ignore" to see if it's solved!

I did try it, pressed it twice and the ignore button went away and I was left with this. I couldnt progress any further :(
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Uh, try rollback! if it catches, hell, I'll try to get the new version out as soon as possible!

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I tried that aswell but it was just an endless loop of the two images I sent you XD even tried different ways of going from afternoon to night but that didnt work neither did loading a save so, thats that I suppose xD but its okay, no problem from me, waiting for it to be fixed. you take your time with it and keep up the great work, its an amazing game! :D

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there was an LM before this? I wish I got to play that :( or am I missing something?

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Yes! LM (Original), No the truth the remake is a re interpretation of this game; if you like this one and want to try it you can search it in F95.

It's not the same story, exactly the same, but the remake (logically) is based on this one.

https://f95zone.to/threads/love-mortem-v0-10a-chris-eman.74409/

Oh well thank you very much Chris, I loved this so im sure ill love this aswell! :D

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Awsome game. 😉

Thank you very much indeed!

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This story is so sad. Ariza was my favorite character. She was the only girl in the game I really connected with and wanted to have a relationship with as the player character, and she goes early on. It's really disappointing because all the other ladies in the game don't seem nearly as appealing or spirited. Even the one in the middle of this page's background who is clearly wearing The Jagged Crown from Skyrim. Also, I think the English translation often gets the gender pronouns wrong.

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Ariza is a very important character, even outside of relationships; this is a remake, and that part of the story is told (now you live it and understand more how it affected the MC).

At one point I hesitated to do something alternative, but first I should finish this canon path, and all its variants.

About the helmet, yes, I knew it later; I have to check it out since the engine's assets come from everything; depending on how it turns out (which for now doesn't give much hope, at least not immediately) I'll see if I can continue and improve in terms of assets or graphic engine, maybe 2D.

The translation, is what I can do at the moment; at the moment a fan is translating it to Portuguese; maybe someone likes it so much that he wants to correct the translation to English, greetings!

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Thanks for the timely response.

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I want to help you with english translation, can we discuss this via e-mail?

Sure, or Discord? which is more fluid there?

Sure, Discord is fine too.

✠ Chris Eman ✠#3176

This is my Discord nickname; if you want, please tell me your nickname and I'll add it.

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So... is this a remake? Was the quality of English improved in it, or is it still just a machine translation?

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I'm sorry to tell you that it is still Deepl (automatic translation); otherwise, if it is a remake of the original (re-imagined in several aspects of the story).

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Thanks, no problem, I guess I should just learn Spanish then xD

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I'm sorry I can't offer a better translation, and being that this game is story-driven, it's complicated, it's not simple porn.

In the original LM, they have helped me to correct, but for free; that is "bread for today, hunger for tomorrow"; I have invested in this, I bought a new PC, and from there I decided to do the remake with another engine, but the translations are very expensive!

And of the +18 Devs, I must be one of the ones who earns the least money.

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By the way, why don't you have a big clickable "support me on patreon" logo on this game page? Why only in your itch profile? I suppose you are creative enough to stylize it in a way to make it fit into this page.

Your art-style is definitely 100/100

Other idea: Why not make a promotion video of the game and upload it to youtube? Other adult games have a promotion video on youtube, and it's fine as long as it doesn't contain any nudity.

Last idea: Instead of hiring translators, try to gather a promotion/marketing team for this game. If enough people would support it, it could be translated. This could be a motivation for people to support the project, even if they don't have a clue about Spanish, because the game looks amazing.

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Yes, thank you! The truth is that the marketing and so on, I'm not good at it, I have to put more activity into it!

Thanks for the ideas! I think it is the most possible.

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Bro, se ve increíble tu juego .😍😍😍

Muchisimas Gracias!

I'm on Android, is there content missing that's only on the PC version?

No, in content the versions are the same, the problem is that in PC; there are certain things that renpy does not have in android, maybe they are more "lost" when navigating and some indications do not come out well.

Also the quick menu and the textbox come out by default; I will fix that, but the point and click part is heavier.

Also in the future, it is very likely that the video and image quality will drop more noticeably because of the andorid limit.

Cheers!

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Thanks for replying so quickly, have a good day and keep doing good work Chris.

On the contrary! Thank you for giving it a try!

porque no me deja descargar el que no es reborn?

Ese lo saque igual que los spinoff, esto es como un "Flashpoint Paradox", a partir de aca iria haciendo spinff, secuelas, si veo que hay apoyo (no hablo de monetario, si no calificacioens poitivas, etc, sentir que no es vano todo el trabajo)
Saludos!

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Pregunta, el juego esta solo en ingles?

No, de hecho es español nativo (latino).
Ahora veo de agregar en castellano algunas descripciones, para que no parezca que es solo ingles.
Saludos!

Me perdí en el bosque de Lux Mortem. Y estoy usando la brújula. Ayuda, por favor.

Brujula
Como estas? Bien? Ahí te deje un lik donde explico lo de la brújula, esta en ingles pero hay imágenes.
Básicamente cuando equipas la brújula, fijate que el icono de la mochila, se transforma en una puerta. 

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Gracias bro

No de nada!

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A review based on the first 30 minutes of playtime

The game has a very interesting premise and the world it all happens in seems well flashed out. But I can't recommend it unless you read Spanish.

My only problem with it is that the English translation is functional but far from good. It makes it hard for me to actually immerse myself in the story and the characters. I was pretty surprised by this because the summary of the game on this page doesn't share any of its problems

For example, sentence structure can be weird, all characters are referred to as 'he' even if they are women, and nicknames are never translated. But the problem isn't just the English skill of the writer, but also that it doesn't feel like the English version has been given a lot of time or effort. Even in the first 20 minutes, there are quite a few sentences that are repeated multiple times and some still have the Spanish preceding them. So there are also proofreading issues.

I do have to commend the creator of the game on their way of handling Ren'py graphics. A lot of the backgrounds and none human models in the game are clearly low resolution. But by the way the shots are framed, it almost makes it unnoticeable and feel like it's part of the art style. In general, it makes it feel retro instead of low quality to me.

TL;DR: The game is worth checking out if you can play it in Spanish.

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Thank you very much!

Yes, it's a real shame about the English, later a friend will help me to correct the translation, but sometimes I'm left with only the translator (deepl).

The story is already complex in Spanish, that must be why the translator fails there or leaves very cold sentences without depth.

LM already exceeds 100 K words and if you see my Patreon you will realize that I can't pay someone to correct everything (they charge in dollars). 

This VN is about to finish and there is already a sequel / spinoff, that one is translated just like this one, I'll see if my friend can help me.

But, he's not native, he just gives it a review and tries to accommodate those things.

He does it for free, so I can't "pressure" him with time and he helps other devs too.

In the end they ended up complaining the same on other forums, and that's when I decided not to bother him anymore for these projects.

I can only hope that someone will ever do a professional English translation Mod!

In another of my VN a group of fans have translated into Italian, so it's not so crazy! (although it's a lot of words!)

I try to compensate for the quality by "putting a little bit of cool" to the renders, my pc is a toaster!


Thanks for commenting!

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Can't get pass the Training with the Red Lady on Android version. How can I pass it??

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Hey, I have been notified recently that for android that mini game doesn't work (on pc you must touch the space bar); (I don't port it) in the next update I will make that test optional so you can skip it.

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Interesting game but i wonder if you plan on doing a Walkthrough for this.

Thank you!

I never thought about it, but I have seen that they have been lost in some parts, so I will most likely do more than a guide, the key parts where players usually get stuck.

Most likely, it will come out in the next update.

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¡Es muy bueno lo bien que se ha desarrollado tu talento en tan poco tiempo! ¡Felicidades! ¡El trabajo de arte y la historia son muy buenos para ambos!

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¡Muchas gracias! Lamentablemente estos últimos meses fueron muy duros, y cada actualización que subía venía acompañado de muy malas calificaciones, voy a intentar darle un cierre o terminar al 0.9 y quizás darle un paro al NSFW por el momento.

Gracias por el apoyo de siempre!

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Es algo que todos debemos decidir por nosotros mismos. Pero su trabajo ha mejorado mucho, así que estoy seguro de que lo que decida hacer será bueno. ¡La mejor de las suertes!

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The resolution is 1920 x 1080... The rest is subjective, my dear.

Not to mention that I've seen that you go through most of the games to leave negative comments...

All good at home, if you need help with your life, you can seek professional help.

Greetings!

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I've barely left any comments at all. And I'd say they were half and half. But this kind of response from you tells me all I need to know. You assume that I have to be in need of "professional help" in order to dislike your game ... classy.

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If you don't have money for professional help, you can always count on the help of the church or public institutions.

Greetings and I hope you get better!

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Vamos hermano adelante con tu Vn un saludo UwU

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Gracias!!

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Me a encantado sumamente el juego, sobretodo por qué para mí absoluta sorpresa estuvo en español de forma nativa sin que alguien externo fuera el traductor, espero más sobre esta historia y dicho esto estaría agradecido de si sabes de más juegos en español en esta página

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Hey muchas gracias! Pronto saldra la V0.6! Conozco varios devs latinos, pero nos e si sus juegos están español, de los que recuerdo:

https://stawer.itch.io/lucky-paradox
https://mistermistergames2020.itch.io/motherless
https://matalla-interactive.itch.io/dirty-business-episode-0

https://neytangames.itch.io/reverse-psychology

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muchas gracias y la estaré esperando! 

La 0.6 ya salio hace casi un mes! ahora esta la 0.7 por salir (si no se retrazan las cosas)  a princicpios del ems que sigue. es mucho mas grande que la 0.6.
Saludos!

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I played your games from the beginning  and must tell you, this is the best put together of them all. Very interesting and like the side information tabs you have built in. Great job!

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Hey! glad to read you again! glad you liked it! this one runs parallel to TESS, it's almost like a spiritual successor to it (until we pick it up again).

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For just being an intro to the game so far it is fairly well written. I have a few issues however.

1) There are points while reading where a character is given the wrong gender.

2) The visuals are good but the lighting is so low that very few details can be made out dropping the over all quality of the work.

Thank you very much!
I can't afford to pay a professional translator, but you are helping me to shape it up a bit!

With the lights, yes, I'm trying not to abuse the "hard shadows" is my style but I think I'm overdoing it!

I've made new renders and modified others on that subject and I'm keeping in mind for the ones coming later.

I think the brightness of my monitor is high, that may be a reason why they are darker than I really want them to be. 

Translated with 

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I can't wait to see where this game goes! Best of luck to you, excited to see the progress!! 😄

Thank you very much indeed! 
Now it's in "the heavy part of programming", but it will be worth it!

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Neat. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Thank you very much for your interest!!! I'm working with another programmer to see that the sandbox mechanics fit the story and the endings as well as possible!

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Hey thank you very much!
Look, while I'm putting together the sandbox mode, I'm also already with the mechanics for the endings, there are 14 of them, so the story you build, you'll see the space you give to the wife and daughter.
Thanks for the comment and the interest!

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Thanks for your comment!

Maybe in your story there is no place for her surrender, although forgiving doesn't mean that you go back to her, but could you make her pay for what she did to you? at what cost?

I hope to be able to sort myself with all the possibilities that exist, I'm making good progress, auqneu after finishing and testing the translation is missing, thanks for the interest!